Sunday, February 28, 2016

Dusk, P.I.; primer short story draft

It’s not something that I like to parade out in front of people.  I mean, in all honesty, there’s a pile of good reasons not to.  People don’t want to hear it, people may not be ready for it, people might even get angry when they’re shown it.


Oh, it’s not that I’m a P.I. that tangles with stuff that doesn’t seem quite right.  God, people just eat that sort of thing up right now.  Everyone wants to be the next ghost hunters or wizard or join up with the vampires, werewolves, ghasts, whatever.  It’s like being back in high school, only with everyone wanting to be the goths.  How many people went to go see those movies more than once?  That’s the biggest reason I don’t put the words ‘occult’ or ‘paranormal’ on my business cards.  When I have them.


No, the thing that I don’t like to parade in front of people is that I’m apparently Blessed.


Now, let’s get something straight.  I’m not going to tell you my life is glamorous.  I’m a private investigator, which seems, by definition, anathema to a glamorous life.  No, see, what I mean is that the Good Lord has seen fit to share some things with me in order to make what I do a little better, I guess.  I have to do this whole spiel every time someone starts after me about it.  I’m not a dancing monkey that’s going to summon angels up at the drop of a hat to either confirm your faith or make you renounce your atheism or something like that.  I’d be kind of worried what would happen if they did show up, really.  I get the idea that they don’t really care for the dancing monkey act, either.


My name is James Dusk, and I’m an investigator.  The Good Lord has seen fit to make me a good one, and maybe a little push that direction.


Which is how I ended up in the middle of the woods.


There had been a rash of disappearances lately.  Not to be cynical, but many disappearances are more mundane than they seem.  They could be as simple as someone tired of the life they’re living and taking off, up to, as much as I hate to say it, human traffickers snatching people.  That’s the bad end of the scale, but it’s on the mundane scale regardless.  This was different.


The people disappearing had been from a series of nearby towns.  Now, there are lots of small towns in the Appalachian Mountains.  In this case, they’d been laid out not too far from each other as the crow flies, but before money came into the region, they weren’t easy to get to.  They’re clustered around a few pretty big hills, down near the flood plains where there’s flat land to build on.  It’s like they were laid out in a rough circle around the high hills.


It hadn’t been fun.  The roads weren’t the problem, the travel wasn’t the problem.  I’m used to the drone of the road, the detached attention to driving and the rest of my brain being somewhat unengaged.  The hard part had been talking to the people who had lost folks close to them, all in the last week.  Two teenagers, sixteen and seventeen had vanished, and they were only children.  Two parents; one had been a mother of one, another had been a father of two.  One forest ranger had gone so long without reporting in, and that was a little easier.  But, five people, gone without a ransom call, a call for help or anything of the sort.  They’d all vanished under different circumstances.  They’d been out running, deer hunting, the ranger had been on patrol, things like that.  But one thing had been the same: they were all near the treelines.  That isn’t saying much on its own, or hadn’t been.  What broke it open was that there had been things left.  Bits of clothing, shoes, jewelry, all with blood on them, left near where the victim had disappeared.


I’d been on my way down to the police station from my hotel room when a black car had pulled into the parking lot.  Two men in black suits hopped out and started across the parking lot towards me.  I had a styrofoam cup of coffee in my hand and no inclination to run from what I guess to be feds, so I walked over to my Crown Victoria and leaned on the back bumper to wait for them.


“Mr. Dusk,” the first one said.  He was trying to be all professional, but he was breathing hard.  It sure wasn’t from walking across a parking lot, so I guessed something had him wound up.


“Mmmm,” I replied, taking a sip from my cup.  The second one, looking younger than the other by a few years, compressed his lips.  He didn’t like my nonchalance.


“Mr. Dusk,” the first one repeated, “I understand you’ve been working on the local disappearances.”


“You understand correctly,” I replied.  The coffee was sludge, but it was hot and caffeinated, so I took another sip.  


“I’m Special Agent Barnes,” the first one said.  “This is Agent Wilson.  We’re from the FBI.”


“Figured,” I replied.  I really wasn’t trying to be rude, but it was seven-thirty in the grey, overcast morning and I had just started my first cup.  “You’re here to tell me to stop my investigation.”


“We should,” said Agent Wilson.  He folded his arms and glared at me.  He had to have been new.  The puffed up intimidation tactic was almost funny if it weren’t so early.  I’m not a big guy; I’m about five foot ten and wiry, and Wilson was big and built.  It was the attitude.  He was so full of pride and vinegar.  “This is now a federal…”


“Oh, quit being such a prick, Wilson,” Barnes said, clearly annoyed.  It was at that moment, I decided I liked Agent Barnes.  “Listen, Mr. Dusk, you’ve been working this case and already been talking to people before we were called in.  The local law enforcement said that you’ve been good about working with them, and I’d kind of like to continue that.”


Things started to make sense.  “Ah, I get it.  People around here don’t exactly care for you guys, but they’ll talk to me.”  I took another sip and noted that Wilson’s jaw clenched.  That was all the confirmation I really wanted.  “So the P.I. that came in and started putting all these together becomes invaluable.”  I tried to keep a smirk off my face.  “Well, fair enough.  So, what’s going on?”


Wilson’s jaw was still clenched.  Combine that with the fact that his face was starting to get a little red and it made me wonder if he was going to chip a tooth.  Agent Barnes reached into his coat and pulled out a notebook.  Notebooks and not smartphones; I was actually a little more impressed by Agent Barnes.  I don’t have anything against smartphones, don’t get me wrong, but I have one of those pay-as-you-go deals, and the reception was spotty at best, so I didn’t use it much.


“Well, five disappearances recently, no real connection between them,” he said, flipping open his notebook.


“Agent Barnes,” I said as diplomatically as I could manage, “I know all that.  Given that you guys have rolled up to me before most people are on the clock makes me think you’ve got something new going on.”


Barnes gave me a slow nod with a small quirk at the corner of his mouth.  “Yes, there is.”  He went down the list.  Personal items, blood on them, and in a few cases, the fingertips of the owners on them.  It still made me shudder a little bit.  


“Great,” I said quietly.  “I knew about that stuff, too.  I don’t know about you guys, but that sounds like serial killer behavior.”  I paused for a moment.  “Wait a minute.  Why is the FBI involved in this?”  They looked at each other for a moment.  I tried to remember what I knew of FBI jurisdiction.  “Wait, another question first; when did you guys get called in?”


“It was when the items were found,” replied Wilson slowly.  “Search parties started finding items matching what the missing people were wearing.  We had to do some verification before we came out here.”


“Oh, crap,” I breathed.  “This is a repeat, isn’t it?  Happened in another state?”


Barnes threw a glare at Wilson.  “Georgia, Tennessee, Ohio, Kentucky have all had similar activity.”


“Right.  Right.  Hang on a minute.”  I thrust my cup at Wilson while I dug my keys out of my pocket.  “I need you to hold this.”  I felt his hand take the cup and I popped the trunk on my car.  It was an old police surplus cruiser, and they had left lots of little brackets and frames in the trunk.  I reached in and first pulled out my coat.  It’s a solid coat, dark brown and marketed to be made out of old firehose material.  It’s called a field coat, so there are pockets all over the thing.  I pulled it on and opened up a black hardshell plastic case.  


In the case, packed with foam that I had cut slots into, were several small items.  I pulled a cross out and slipped it over my head, then some other small trinkets and slipped them into other pockets.  I then moved one of the foam sheets and used a key to open a lockbox underneath.  In the box was my shoulder holster and my FN Five-Seven.  I pulled the slide to check the chamber, snapped the safety on and grabbed three magazines.  I heard someone behind me choke when he saw the gun.  With a sigh, I reached into a jacket pocket and pulled out a card.


“Concealed carry and registration,” I said, holding them up.  “Don’t have an aneurysm.”  I put them back in my pocket.  “Like I’d want to pull a gun in front of two agents.”  I slid one magazine in the gun, put on the holster and then the coat over it.  Finally, I grabbed my cap, a military surplus patrol cap, shut the trunk lid and turned to them.


Agent Barnes looked unimpressed.  “You do realize we don’t intend on taking you for an arrest, and all that…” he gestured with one hand, “is unnecessary.”


“Yeah, a jacket, a hat, some stuff in the pockets and a firearm are unreasonable in the face of a serial killer being on the loose.”  I took my coffee back from Wilson, and noticed he had slopped more than half of it out.  My guess was it was him that had the reaction when I got my gun.  “Thanks,” I said to him and knocked back what was left.  “So, what’s next?”


The two nice agents gave me a ride to the Sheriff’s office.  I sat in the back and looked out the window, letting my mind wander.  Something about this had seemed wrong from the start, but now, with the new developments, this whole thing seemed to be wrapped in a greasy coat in my mind, like something was wrong.  I reached into a pocket and rubbed a small LED flashlight.  Along the length of it, a friend of mine had etched the words “Luke 1:79” into the steel.  To shine on those living in darkness and in the shadow of death, to guide our feet into the path of peace.  Something was very, very wrong here, and I couldn’t put my finger on what.


I ended up following the two of them into the dispatch office with my mind still rolling over what was going on.  They went in and Wilson started making a big deal about it being a federal case now.  If Barnes hadn’t seemed so irritated, I’d have sworn that they were doing a good cop, bad cop routine on cops.  While they were getting everything laid out on a large conference room table, I was snapped out of my funk when the sheriff walked up to me.


“Morning, Mr. Dusk,” he said to me quietly.  Sheriff Combs wasn’t a big man, of about my height and with some comfortable weight of age, but his eyes were sharp, and his iron gray hair and mustache made him look like the prototypical seasoned officer.  He was sharp and willing to talk to me.  


“Morning Sheriff,” I replied.  “I know you’ve got to be thrilled,” I said, nodding to the agents.


He shrugged.  “If it’s a serial case, then I say let them at it.  If it slips through their fingers or blows up in their face, won’t be our fault.”  I looked at him, confused.  “I’ve done this dance before,” he said.  “I don’t much care to get tangled up.  So, why did they bring you?”


“Easier to have me come along rather than write down everything relevant I could know.”  I sighed.  “Do you guys have any coffee?”  He chuckled and gestured to the corner of the room.  “Thanks.”


I made the slow walk to the ambrosia dispenser while looking at the things on the table.  The personal items were spread out around a map and corresponding notes with them.  I stared at the table for a minute, then took a drink.  Everyone seemed to be talking at once, pointing at the map where there were red marks where the items had been found.  I tilted my head, looking at everything.  


“Well, it’s obvious we’re looking for something in here,” Agent Barnes said, connecting the dots in a large circle.  “Are there any structures of any type in this area?” he asked.


“There’s an old mine here,” one deputy said, pointing at a location.  Wilson made a mark and notation on the map.”


“There used to be a community here, the only thing still there is what’s left of the schoolhouse,” another said, which was also marked and noted.  


“What about…” I said, starting to think out loud.


“No one asked you,” said Wilson, without looking up.


“What’s your problem?” I shot back at him.  I’ll admit, this guy had rubbed me the wrong way early on, and now, having just finished a full cup of coffee, I was only getting to being prepared for polite society.


“My problem is that you’re just some private dick that was brought in for a disappearance, and now you’re in the middle of…”


“You two brought me in,” I countered.


“And when we want your opinion,” he started.


“SHUT UP,” Agent Barnes shouted, interrupting him.  “Alright, Dusk, you’re here for insight, since you’ve been working the whole area.  What have you got?”


I looked at the map for another minute, then spun it.  I leaned down on the table and reached to the side, grabbing a file folder.  Using its spine as a straight edge, I started marking on the map with a felt tip pen I pulled from another coat pocket.  Long slashes marked the map, connecting the points in the circle.  When I was done, I had a pentacle staring back at me.  The center of the… “Oh, great,” I muttered, then spun the map again.  With it oriented correctly, the north side of the map away from me, I had an inverted pentacle, a pentagram on the map.  And in the middle was a small field on the map.  I put a dot in the center.  “More and more serial killer all the time,” I sighed.


“Get me the GPS location of the center of that,” said Agent Barnes.


That’s how I ended up out in the woods.


I’m not exactly sure why they brought me, except that I guess they felt like they needed as many warm bodies as they could drum up.  They had left men on patrol back in the towns, and gathered up people from each force.


We crept forward, and we spread out. We had formed a long line, working our way through the woods with our weapons readied. We'd discussed putting suppressors on our guns, but decided that we wanted to have the light and noise in case one of us found him without someone around.


The sky was dark overhead, the moon was only a sliver in the sky and thick clouds drifted slowly. We kept moving forward, being as quiet as we could. As we moved further and further forward, I checked the GPS unit I'd clipped to my vest to make sure we were still on track. Our goal was dead ahead when I realized that the only sounds I could hear were my own breath and the quiet rustling of the other officers. The sounds of the night had otherwise gone completely quiet.


I looked around slowly. The other men had slowed their movements as well. When my radio earpiece clicked on, I almost jumped out of my boots. "Team, check in." Agent Barnes was asking for us to count off, and through a sense of dread, I realized why. We checked in all down the line, one after another, until Jenkins didn't answer.


Jenkins had been on the flank for a reason. Jenkins was a big guy, maybe six foot five and two hundred and fifty pounds of solid rock. He was the anchor for the line, since anyone trying to move on him would find a sudden, loud, violent reaction. Agent Wilson was the next in line on that end, and clicked on the tac light on his pistol. The white light was bright and harsh to our eyes, but it was easy to see as he swept it over where Jenkins had been.


Once again, the radio clicked on, but with a burst of static, which didn’t happen when any of us used them.  "Children," came a slow, rich voice flavored with a long drawl, "this is certainly no place for decent folks like you to be. Run along home."


I turned to look at Agent Barnes and I saw him scowl. There was no way he could let this go. This creep had taken one of their own, and they were going to take him down. The line moved forward again. I glanced at my GPS and saw we were approaching the coordinates. I lifted my eyes and saw there was a break in the trees ahead of us.


The break in the trees opened into a small clearing, right in the center of the compass we'd charted on the map. In the center of the clearing, there was a sizeable shack, cobbled together from what looked like cast off timber and sheets of tin for roofing. There were no lights. And that's when noticed something else: the scarecrows.


No, not exactly.  They were the bodies of the missing people on frames like scarecrows.  They formed a line in the treeline just outside the clearing and all faced outward.


Towards us.


I swallowed and looked past them and into the clearing. That's where I saw Jenkins lying on the ground. His head was twisted around at an unnatural angle, and I knew he was gone. That's when I saw the other figure. It wasn't as big as Jenkins, but it wasn't much smaller. It was hard to see details. He was covered in a long coat of what looked like faded black denim, and a broad brimmed hat was pulled low. The figure turned in the clearing, pulled another scarecrow frame out of the shack and draped Jenkins over it. Then, he pivoted smoothly and planted the new scarecrow in the clearing, facing us and looming by Jenkins' body in the pale moonlight.


The radio crackled once more and I heard the Barnes’ voice: "Fire."


The stillness was shattered by a hail of gunfire. Scarecrows bucked and jerked as rounds tore through them. Pieces of the shack shuddered in the impact of rounds landing, but the figure in the clearing turned on his heel and walked to the shack, vanishing from our view. Some kept firing at the shack, looking to land a hit inside. Then it was quiet. The night seemed even more quiet than it had been. I took a deep breath. Maybe we'd gotten him.


There was a rustle of chains and a strangled shout. I turned, flicking my gun light on, but saw nothing. Nothing except a hole in the line where a deputy had been. I swung my light, looking to see if he'd moved forward. I saw the figure, walking parallel to our line. He stepped behind a tree. He didn't emerge from the other side of it.


Instead, he emerged from behind another tree twenty feet away, his stride unbroken.


They opened fire again. Handguns barked their shots as we followed the line of progress this... thing made. The sheriff’s shotgun boomed through the night as he fired. I had given Wilson a hard time for bringing an SMG with him, but now, I was saw he knew what he was doing. The fully automatic hail of 9mm rounds scythed through the woods.


The figure kept moving. I saw him emerge from a patch of shadows behind Wilson and whip his arm. I heard, even above the gunfire, a rattle of chains as what looked like a rusted logging chain snaked out and wrapped around Wilson’s neck. With a sharp jerk, he went down, and the figure turned again and vanished. We turned wildly, hoping to catch him in our lights.  I kept trying to figure out what my move should be, but moving anywhere was probably going to get me shot.  


He appeared again and swung a fist at Barnes. There was an audible crunch and Barnes went down as well. One by one, he seemed to appear and take them down with contemptible ease.  I had my opening and went for it.  I bolted into the clearing, past the scarecrow bodies.  If he didn’t have some way to break line of sight, maybe he couldn’t approach without moving in the open.  I also started going through my pockets.  I heard shouts and screams as the fight continued.


As I pulled my cross out from under my shirt, I turned, looking for motion.  The door to the shack stood open.  Here, in the clearing, the full moon overhead lit the night quite clearly, but the door’s threshold was covered by a curtain of inky blackness.  And I felt a crawling, tingling sensation on my skin, like it was being covered in dirty oil.  I knew that feeling.  It came from the presence of… “Demon,” I whispered to myself.


“Oh, but yes, child,” came that rich voice.  “You aren’t as clueless as the others, but your weapon won’t do.  It didn’t for any of the others.”


I turned on my heel and pulled a small, inscribed LED flashlight.  “Lord, let me see as it truly is,” I whispered to myself.  The light on my pistol played over the form of the man.  Heavy, rusted chains were wrapped around his fists, and he stood not six feet away from me in the clearing.  His coat was unmarked by bullet holes and his broad brimmed hat, looking to be made of pale leather, covered the upper part of his face.  The beam from my gun light almost seemed to slide off of him.  But the beam from my little flashlight didn’t.  The being flinched from it, and as I ran it over its face, I saw what looked to be a human face, but eyes black as pitch with small, red pupils, glaring at me.  


“How dare you,” it hissed at me.


“Yup.”  Okay, listen, I was pretty terrified, so I wasn’t at my wittiest, but this wasn’t the newest ground to me, either.  I also knew one other thing: since the light in my hand revealed it as it was, that meant that I knew exactly where it stood.  So I fired.


An FN Five Seven is not a small gun.  It’s not a cheap gun, it doesn’t have cheap ammo.  What it has is a twenty round magazine and a lot of punch for a handgun.  I fired ten shots in rapid succession, working hard to keep my breath measured and my eyes focused.  At this range, I knew I could hit him, but my grouping would probably be terrible.  Yeah, facing a demon in his little refuge in the pale moonlight will do that to you.


Ten shots slammed into the figure, tearing holes in its coat and making him stagger with each one.  Each jerk from impact made me bolder, and my hands steadier.  This wouldn’t kill it, but it would certainly make it think twice.  


It raised a hand and one of the rusty chains lashed towards me like a snake.  The demon’s eyes blazed hate at me.  “One of the Faithful,” it spat.  “Didn’t think I’d get to kill one of you in this day and age.”  The chain seemed to be alive as it wrapped around my neck and tighten.  I dropped my light and grasped at it, but it seemed to writhe in my grip, preventing me from being able to pull it open.  


I staggered as the chain tightened; I kept a death grip on my pistol.  If I dropped that, I had this strong suspicion that I was done.  Blood thundered in my ears as I tried to shake it off.  My footing got unsteady and I dropped to my knees.  I knew I wasn’t just being strangled.  The chain was also restricting blood flow to my brain, and it was doing it well.  My vision was turning red and inky blackness was creeping in from the edges of my vision.  


I kept trying to reach into one of my pockets, but my fingers were too clumsy.  I couldn’t feel very well through my fingertips, and I felt my conscious thought slipping away.  I couldn’t reach any of my tools, I couldn’t aim well enough to rely on my gun to get me out of this.  


“Sleep, little man,” came the demon’s voice.  “Let the darkness carry you away.  I can’t wait.”


I had one idea left.  I reached my hand up towards my neck again, and even in the state I was in, I could see the demon’s eyes.  They lit with excitement and anticipation.  It was expecting me to make a last, desperate struggle to remove the chain.  Instead, I pulled on a different chain around my neck and tugged the shiny cross from under my shirt.  “Though I walk…” I gasped, barely more than a whisper, “through the valley of the shadow of death…”  It was so hard to even think, I felt like my brain was going to explode.  “I will fear…” the demon’s eyes widened when it realized what I was saying.  “...no evil, for You are with me…”  


The chain leapt from my neck like it had been burned.  I pitched forward, gasping for air.  My vision began to clear slowly, but I could see the cross hanging from it’s chain, glowing faintly.  I got one foot up, knelt on just one knee and lifted my head.  I didn’t have time to recover, the demon was still right there.  It snarled at me, raised a hand again, and flung more chains at me.  The end of the chains had tied themselves into large, bulky knots as they flew at me.  The first one approached the glow of my cross and turned, not hitting dead into my chest, but instead hitting my left arm.  The pain shot through me, but it was galvanizing, bringing me back from the haze of trying to recover.  Another knotted chain shot towards me and I rolled.  Again and again, the chains fired out, cutting massive divots in the dirt where I had been as I kept moving.  


I managed to twitch aside from another flying chain and grab it.  I dropped my gun, grasped my cross on its long chain, and pressed metal to metal.  There was a loud hiss and white smoke rose up.  I let go and the chain recoiled like a snake, flailing in what I could have sworn was pain.  The demon was clutching the arm that had thrown the chain and snarling at me.  The two lengths started to slowly draw back to the creature, which gave me time to pick up my gun.  My light still shone, the beam resting across the front of the shack from where it lay.


“Pretty sure you aren’t welcome here,” I said.  I was trying to think, desperately kicking my brain into gear.


“Ah, but child,” it replied as the chain slithered back up its coat sleeve, “welcome doesn’t have anything to do with it.  I go where I’m fed.”


“What do you feed on,” I demanded.  If I didn’t take this thing down, I’d need to know, and I was trying to get it talking to buy time.  Demons always have egos and they just love to gloat.


“The dregs of mankind,” he said, his voice warm with satisfaction.  “Hate, wrath, lust, pride, all of those I find sweeter than the finest honey.”  It started to circle me, towards my left, so I carefully shuffled my feet to follow.  It was heading towards its shack, and I suspected that it was either going to try to escape or pull a nasty surprise.


I was dealing with an intelligent beast.  It knew what it fed on, and it knew how to create more of what it wanted.  It was finding people that fed its hunger, then using them to create more food.  That’s why I had kept feeling the inky darkness around everything on this case.  This thing was actively nurturing and consuming all the darker sides of people, and it was making a blanket in the area.  The atmosphere of fear, anger and things of that nature would just make it stronger.  Time to do something about it.


“Lord, give me what I need,” I prayed quietly as I got to my feet.  The demon’s head twitched at me, and I took a long step to my right.  That put the demon right in front of its door in my line of sight.  Then I started firing.  The next ten shots were all dead center, and hammered the creature back into the doorway.  When the chamber locked open, I dropped the gun and pulled a glass vial from a coat pocket.


I knew a few things.  Demons needed anchors to act like this.  Since it had been moving around and operating on a specific pattern, that meant it either had a human host or it was creating locations of power to base out of.  This shack was clearly something of the sort; it had created a barrier to keep things out.  If someone had tried to get inside, that darkness could have torn them apart, killed them instantly or just swallowed them whole, never to be seen again.  Which meant that I knew what I was going for.


Holy water isn’t some sort of magical hand grenade.  It doesn’t burn with white fire or anything like that.  However, when it’s blessed by a true person of faith, it can certainly react.  Especially if what you’re up against believes it will.  My light was already on the curtain of inky blackness and I could almost hear some sort of scream as it seemed to peel back.  Inside, the demon was just regaining its footing from where my shots had driven it back.  I gave the vial an underhand toss and it seemed to shine in the light.  It hit the creature, shattered and it bellowed out an unearthly roar.  A door of battered planks swung shut and the shack quivered, then collapsed in on itself.


I felt like a heavy blanket was fading away, slowly ebbing.  I didn’t seem to have to breathe quite as hard and the night air lost an oily quality, tasting sweeter by the breath.  The moonlight shone a little brighter.  I picked up my pistol, replaced the magazine and stuck it back in my shoulder holster.  It wasn’t dead, but it wasn’t here anymore.


I turned, feeling exhausted, and turned.  The grisly scarecrows still hung.  The bodies of the men that had come with me still lay in the forest.  And I felt a crushing sadness that these people had been taken in the way they had.  It told me something else; the creature wasn’t fully otherwordly.  If it had been powerful enough to manifest here on Earth, then it would have consumed these people, their bodies gone as well.  This was a presence tied to a human, altering it and empowering it.  It could be from full on possession to some dark partnership.  And it had gotten away.  


I did the only thing I could think of.  All of these people, gone because of the dark evil a man’s heart had chosen.  I dropped to my knees and I sang an old hymn for them.  My voice was broken and raspy ,and tears ran down my face, but I sang for them, a hymn and a prayer together.


“Oh, come, angel band.  Come and, around us, stand.  Oh, bear them away on your snow-white wings, to our immortal home.  Oh, bear them away on their snow-white wings, to our immortal home.”

Wednesday, July 17, 2013

The Story of Bat Canyon, part 2

The sheriff and preacher both mounted up, wearing their rain dusters and with their weapons loaded.  The preacher tucked his heavy brass cross into an inner pocket and they set off.  They rode side by side, neither man talking.  The sheriff's eyes were hard as they rode.  The preacher guessed he was having the same misgivings: facing an unnatural creature of ability unknown to them.

The clouds overhead continued to race, but growing thicker and heavier.  The sun had passed the peak of noon and the sky grew darker.  The steady drumming of horse hooves was the only sound for a while.

"If Smith is one of these things," the sheriff said, "how do we kill him?"

The preacher looked up.  "Easiest way is out," he said.  "The other common ways are to put a wood stake through the heart or taking his head off.  I don't know if anything else will work.". He thought for a moment.  "Some stories say the heart thing doesn't have to be a wood stake, but then it won't kill him that case either."

The sheriff twitched his moustache for a moment.  "Reckon we go with the most likely, then.  Take the head off.  That kills most things pretty dead.  Question is, what will do it.". He took a deep breath.  "Maybe he's got an axe for splitting wood."

"You think that he has something around that will be so good at killing him?"

"We own guns, don't we?"

The preacher stopped and smiled briefly.  “I take your point.”

As they rode away from town towards the ridge where Bat Canyon lay, the sheriff started turning north.  The preacher turned to match pace, but turned and looked at the older man.

“It’s been dry, so we don’t want to go straight in.  Dust cloud will be easy to see from miles out.”  The sheriff patted his eight gauge.  “We don’t have the kind of range that we might in that case.  I’m no good shot with a rifle no way.”  They rode on quietly.  “I figure we can come from the edge, where the canyon cuts back into the hills.  It’s surrounded by cliffs and there are spots where we can hide out and watch.”  He paused, rubbing at his chin in thought.  “What about the symbol of faith?  Is that something that seems to work on all of them?”

“So far as I know, yes,” the preacher replied.  “But if I understand right, it’s not just the symbol.  You have to have faith in it.”  He reached inside his coat.  “You want one of the crosses?”

“I figure that’s your job,” the sheriff replied.  “If you can keep him back, I can put some shot in him.  Whether or not it kills him, doesn’t matter, it’s going to hurt.  Buy us some time.”

As they rode on, high winds began to whip around them.  The men’s long coats flapped hard, snapping with each gust.  The sheriff pulled the bandana around his neck up over his mouth and nose almost unconsciously.  The preacher pulled his hat lower and tucked his chin.  Tumbleweed blew by, just barely touching the ground until it caught on one of the scattered cacti.  The wind blew hard enough to howl, making dust rise all around them.  The preacher looked around, his eyes squinted against the grit in the air.  Waves of dust blew by.  He thought he almost even saw a cloud of more concentrated dust in the distance, but it disappeared quickly.

The sheriff reached over and tapped his arm, then gestured ahead to the rising rocks ahead.  They spurred the horses forward into a cleft, finally finding shelter against the wind.  The sheriff pulled down his bandana and dismounted.  The preacher followed suit and the horses whickered nervously, edging into the cleft, away from the driving wind.

“This is where I figured we’d leave the horses,” the older man said.  “We can reach the entrance to Bat Canyon on foot pretty quick from here, and there’s a sharp outcrop on this side.  Get ready, we’ll be heading in.”  He followed his own advice, slipping a round into the empty slot in his Colt and then loading shells into the double barrels of his shotgun.  The preacher nodded, then slipped his .44 from its holster.  He popped the cylinder out and filled into the empty spot.  After thinking for a moment, he holstered his pistol, then pulled off his hat and slipped his cross off from around his neck.  He looped the leather cord around his right wrist and pulled it tight, so his cross would dangle from his wrist.  He then pulled the large, bronze cross from his coat and hefted it in his left hand.  The sheriff nodded, pulled up his bandana and they walked back out into the wind.  

The crept forward, keeping close to the jutting stone of the cliffs.  The preacher felt his hands sweating, felt perspiration on his brow and nerves clenching his stomach.  The sound of their footsteps crunching on rocky dirt was lost to the howling wind, their tracks being blown away behind them.  Each and every turn the rocks took had the preacher holding his breath in anticipation, until the sheriff finally held up a hand and then slipped around the next turn.  The preacher tried taking a calming breath, and instead, uttered the Lord’s Prayer to himself before following.  

Inside the entrance to the canyon, the wind abated, cut off by the step rocks all around them.  The canyon was a box canyon that didn’t go very far back in.  The dim light from the sky was just enough to make out a farmhouse ahead.  Flickering light glowed inside one of the windows, and the preacher believed he saw slight movement.  

A strong hand grabbed him and hauled him aside, pulling him into a split in the rock . The sheriff glared at him.  “Standing in the open defeats the point,” he said in a harsh whisper.  “Now, settle in, we’re going to wait a bit.”

“What are we waiting for?” the preacher asked quietly.

“Not sure,” the sheriff replied.  “I’m thinking he’ll have to come out at some point.  I’ll let you know.”

The two men leaned against the rocks, trying to keep their breathing even.  The preacher felt something tap against his fingers and looked down to see the cross hanging from his wrist where it tapped against his trembling hand.  He swallowed a bitter taste out of his mouth took a deep breath.  The sheriff carefully opened the breach of the shotgun, checked the shells and quietly snapped it closed.  Thunder crashed overhead, making the two of them duck their heads.  

The door to the house swung open just after the thunderclap, and the man known as Mr. Smith in town stepped onto his porch.  The overhead sky was dark, the sun blocked by angry storm clouds.  Smith wasn’t fully dressed, only a pair of denim pants and boots, leaving his upper body bare.  He was wiping at his arms and hands with a white towel, but with streaks of red in the fabric.  He was tall and broad shouldered and walked with an air of strength about him.  However, his body was not heavy; it looked almost emaciated and thin, as if everything that wasn’t muscle or sinew had wasted away.  His skin had a sickly pale color to it.  His dark, stringy hair clung to his head and his eyes gazed out towards the mouth of the canyon from sunken depths.  

“I know you’re there,” he called out in a heavily accented voice.  “I guess the day finally came.  Let us finish this.”

The two men looked at each other, startled.  They were certain they hadn’t been seen.  The preacher swallowed again, even though his mouth had gone dry.  The sheriff looked at him and nodded.  They both shifted to step out and meet this creature.

Lightning crashed at the top of the cliffs overhead and thunder slammed down around them.  When they lifted their heads, they saw a figure walking to the mouth of the canyon from the winds and now-driving rains.  Night Sky emerged from the cacophony, his dark eyes glaring hate at Smith.  “Very well,” he said.  His voice seemed to carry like Smith’s, audible despite the storm.  

Night Sky took long, springing steps, moving forward.  The sheriff and preacher watched, their eyes wide.  Night Sky had come to face Smith?  And Smith knew?  That’s when things changed again, and more questions arose.  Night Sky’s steps ended in a leap and his form shifted, flowing smoothly.  His dark hair lengthened and his body elongated, growing longer and heavier.  His hands turned into almost large claws and fur covered his body, almost like it was meant to be there.  His face lengthened and white teeth flashed.  A large creature of canine overtones landed, slashing its clawed hands at Smith.

Smith had moved to meet the rush, and as Night Sky landed, Smith had lunged, shoving his shoulder into the other man’s gut and wrapped his arms around the body.  With a heave, he lifted and turned in a throw that rotated them both all the way around and slammed the hairy creature to the ground with a shout.  They landed hard, Smith on his knees and Night Sky on his back, yelping at the impact.  The indian didn’t waste time, lashing out with teeth and claws.  His right hand scored a slash across Smith’s collarbone, causing deep gashes.  Smith leapt back, a snarl contorting his sunken face.  The gashes didn’t bleed, and he paid no attention to them.

Night Sky had already rolled to his feet and dashed forward again.  Smith met this charge, too, going low and thrusting his hands at the indian’s body and upward.  The hairy creature went up with his own momentum and Smith’s strength, being slung over Smith’s head and thrown away, again crashing to the ground.  Smith followed and raised a boot to stomp, but Night Sky rolled away again and came to his feet.  

Smith snarled and spat in the dirt.  “You think to drive me out?  We are coming, and the likes of you will not stop us.”

“Come,” Night Sky replied, barely understandable through the long jaws.  “Come, and be prepared to die by the score.”

Again, they clashed.  This time, Night Sky had come in low.  He had his left hand on the ground, his right extended and caught Smith across the body.  Then, with a savage snarl, his jaws snapped, catching Smith’s right arm, just above the wrist.  Smith cried in pain, then gripped the back of the shaggy head with his other hand, pivoted smoothly and slammed Night Sky into the ground, head-first with the rest of his weight falling on top of his head.  There was a distinctly canine yelp of pain and Night Sky crumpled on the ground.

“Now,” said the sheriff.  They stepped out from their hiding spot together, as they had discussed.  The preacher stood in the front, holding the large cross and holding the pistol at his side.  The sheriff stood slightly behind him, to one side, with the barrel of the shotgun pointed forward.  The sound of their footsteps were lost to their own ears, but Smith lifted his head to look towards them.  He looked confused at first, then snarled.

“What do you want?” Smith said.  He turned to face them, his hands curled but not closed to fists.  He was leaned forward, bent slightly at the waist.  “You have ensured your death, coming here.”

“We do not fear you, undead!” the preacher shouted, walking forward at a steady pace.  “The Lord has sent a reckoning!”

“Brave words,” Smith said, moving in a circular motion.  “Yet, neither of you are close enough for the sheriff’s shotgun to reach me.”

“Watch it,” the sheriff muttered.  He’s circling, trying to keep you between him and me.”

“Isn’t that good for you?” the preacher muttered back.

“I can’t shoot him that way.”

The preacher stopped his movement, then headed back towards the mouth of the canyon, blocking the way out.  The vampire tilted his head slightly at the action, then moved laterally, trying to create another arc.  The preacher moved laterally to match him, but instead moved forward, drawing closer to Smith.  The preacher felt his nerves fade away.  The Lord was with him.  This creature would not harm them.

Smith took steps back, slowly, assessing the situation.  Then, in one fluid movement, he reached back to the pile of split wood he’d moved towards and flung one of the pieces at the preacher.  The sheriff hauled the other man down and the wood shattered loudly against the canyon wall.  Smith moved towards them in an instant, closing the distance since the preacher had dropped the big brass cross in his fall.  So instead, the preacher raised his pistol.  Smith smiled, then stopped, his eyes widening.

Beneath the preacher’s hand hung the other cross, dangling below the butt of the pistol.  Smith’s head turned, realizing how close he had gotten.  That’s when two barrels of 8 gauge buckshot hit him squarely in the chest.

Smith flew backwards and landed, tumbling over his shoulder to lay facedown on the ground.  The preacher and sheriff, both still seated on the ground let out low sighs of relief.  That is, until Smith pushed himself upright.  His chest was a mass of ruined flesh that still didn’t bleed.  The muscles were torn to shreds and Smith’s arms didn’t seem to hang quite right, but he still raised them and came forward.  The sheriff scrambled, trying to get two new shells into his shotgun.  

But Night Sky had recovered and dove on Smith’s back.  His long, canine jaws clamped down on Smith’s neck and his talon hands wrapped over the vampire’s shoulders.  Smith’s eyes grew wide just before Night Sky began to thrash his head back and forth.  Smith stumbled, staggered and turned, trying to slam his back, and Night Sky, into the canyon walls.  He slammed once, twice, three times, but grimly, the indian held on.

The preacher hadn’t wasted his time.  While the sheriff was finally sliding fresh shells into his shotgun, the preacher had grabbed one of the long shards from the wood at the canyon wall.  As Smith slammed Night Sky into the wall again, the preacher stepped forward, raised the wood and drove it through Smith’s ruined chest.  The sheriff’s shotgun hadn’t just shredded muscle, it had shattered ribs as well, and the improvised stake dug home easily.  

Smith went suddenly still, then began to pitch forward.  Night Sky hopped back, away from the vampire.  Even as he did, his body began to change again, turning back into the lean indian.  Smith’s body withered quickly, fading to grey dust.  Soon, a pile of pale ash lay on the canyon floor.  The preacher sighed, then lifted his eyes from the deceased Smith.  Night Sky met his gaze steadily.

“So,” the preacher said.  “It seems there’s more going on.”

“Yes,” Night Sky said.  

“I’ve heard of that before, being able to turn into a wolf.  Some call it a curse.”

Night Sky shrugged.  “Curse or not, it is who I am.”

“Have you fought one of these before?” the preacher asked.

“Yes,” came the simple reply.  After a moment, he continued: “I watch over this land against things like this.  Smith was stronger than any of these creatures than I have ever heard of, and a skilled fighter.”

“You could have told us,” the preacher said quietly.

“Could I?”  Night Sky’s eyes were hard.  “No matter.  You and the sheriff... I’m glad you were here.”

The sheriff walked up to them, shotgun still in his hand.  “He said there would be more coming.”

“He did,” Night Sky replied.  “That is why I’m glad you were here.  Not only for helping me, but now you know what is coming.”

Wednesday, June 26, 2013

The Story of Bat Canyon, part 1


“No, I don’t reckon I’ve seen this before,” the preacher said, standing up and slipping his broad brimmed slouch hat back on.  “This cow’s been drained.”  The carcass laying on the ground in front of him was freshly dead, but hadn’t started to smell yet.  The neck was open in a ragged wound, and there was blood on the hide around it, but not near enough to account.  


“See, preacher?” the rancher said to him.  “It’s unholy!  What kind of monster would do this?”  The older rancher stood there with his ranch foreman, pale and sweating more than the cool of the morning would have caused.  He’d sent his foreman to come get the preacher when the carcass had been discovered a little after dawn.  It was far enough out from the ranch house to not be seen easily, but close enough to scare folk.  


The preacher stepped back, reciting a prayer to himself.  He turned his head, looking out over the flat land in the cool of the morning.  The sun hadn’t risen very far, and the sky was a patchwork of heavy clouds breaking the clear blue sky.  “Reckon it’d be unholy,” he said quietly.  “But we also need some more to go on.  I can’t track worth a lick.  I’m thinkin’ we ought to rustle up the Sheriff, maybe even Night Sky.”


The two ranchers looked at each other.  The Sheriff wouldn’t surprise them, but Night Sky was a gruff Comanche.  He lived in the area, working as a tracker and hunter, selling pelts or helping find stock that had been stolen or people that had gotten lost.  He was unpleasant, but good at his craft, and his attitude rubbed some people the wrong way.


“Preacher,” the foreman said.  He had a carefully blank face, obviously holding up better than the rancher.  “What do you think did this?”


The preacher turned to them and considered.  He knew what it pointed to, but these men didn’t and he wasn’t about to frighten people.  “Not sure,” he allowed.  “But we’ll find out.”  With that, he walked back to his horse and swung into the saddle.  “We’ll be back in a while.  Have one of your boys make sure no coyotes or anything mess with it.”  He turned and rode off before he saw them nod.  Granted, he wasn’t very old, just shy of thirty, but those men were scared and wanted someone to tell them it would be alright and that they’d be taken care of.  


His horse’s easy trot back towards town gave him time to think.  He absently tucked his cross back into his shirt, thinking about what to tell the Sheriff.  Yeah, this seemed like a vampire.  He knew they existed back in Europe, and had an older clergyman tell him back East about a fight he had with one.  Tough creatures, fed on blood, other abilities depending on lineage or some such.  The older clergyman had told him bits and pieces, but he wasn’t sure himself.  From what he’d been told, some were like regular folk but stronger and faster.  Some could change into bats.  This was all based on what kind of vampire they were, being cursed into it, being changed by another vampire or something else.  Apparently these were all possibilities.  But why not say anything to the ranchers?  If they didn’t know what they were, they sure weren’t going to be settled after the explanation they’d demand.  What was for certain was they couldn’t handle displays of faith or sunlight.  You could kill them, but again, that was tricky.  These different types all had different ways of being killed for good.


He let these thoughts bounce around in his head as he rode up to the church and the house next to it.  He wasn’t married yet, so he tried to keep things as clean as he could.  He had a handful of sheep to keep the grass down, and he didn’t bother with planting anything.  He swung his door open and walked into his bedroom.  He pulled open his nightstand and pulled a heavy .44 revolver and holster.  After a moment’s consideration, he walked back into the living room, opened his rolltop desk and reached into the back, pulling out a large, bronze cross.   The old clergyman had admonished him to always keep something like that around.  He couldn’t say why, but he followed that advice ever since.  If the legends about vampires were true, his pistol wouldn’t do much good, but it would make him feel better.  As he headed towards the door, the clouds overhead rumbled, looking darker.  He stopped and sighed.   Then, he reached behind the door and pulled his long rain duster off its peg.  On reflection, he was glad for an excuse.  If people saw the preacher around town with a gun on his hip, they’d get nervous, too.


He swung back up on his horse and touched heels to flank, heading towards the jail at a brisk trot.  The rain clouds overhead rumbled menacingly as he rode up the main street of the town, but held off their impending storm.  The horse’s hooves beat a steady rhythm up to the door of the jail.  The preacher hopped off, looped the reins over the hitching post and went inside.  


The sheriff looked up as he walked in.  His gray eyes matched the iron of his mustache, but he was still of sharp mind and quick, steady hands.  Folk in town knew better than to push the sheriff too far, ever since about five years back, a gun thug had drifted into town.  The sheriff had come to tell him to move along with an 8 gauge shotgun in his hand.  The thug had tried to draw and ended up dying in the street.  The sheriff had gravel in his guts, but was fair.


“Preacher,” he said, standing up from his chair by his desk at the front of the jail.  “Don’t reckon I’ve got many sinners here for you to talk to today.  Night Sky and I were just havin’ us a chat.”  The preacher started, just noticing the other man sitting on the bench by the door.  He just sat so still.  


“No problems, I take?” the preacher asked.  “Mornin’, Night Sky, sheriff,” he said, touching the brim of his hat to them both.
“Good morning, preacher,” the indian replied.


“And to you, preacher,” the sheriff said.  “Naw, we were just havin’ a chat about the rustlers from last week and when the reward would be comin’ in.  Stage in a few days is supposed to have Night Sky’s payoff.  Reckon they’re goin’ choke when they see it’s going to him, so he came to make sure I was there.”  The sheriff looked intently at the preacher, noting the iron on his hip, but saying nothing.


“Ah, I see,” the preacher replied.  “It’s just as well.  I was asked out to the XK Ranch this mornin’, and there’s something I’d like the two of you to see.”


The sheriff and Night Sky looked at each other quizzically, but didn’t waste time getting saddled up.  As they rode out back to the ranch, the preacher gave them the bare bones description of the cow and what had looked to happen.  Neither of the other men commented, but they rode on.  He watched the sheriff lean down and slip the strap off his shotgun’s sheath on the saddle.  


When they rode up, the sky overhead had changed.  The heavy, dark clouds were racing overhead, still breaking up the sunlit sky, but rumbling with thunder.  A young ranch hand sat atop his horse near the dead cow, a rifle slanted across his saddle.  He waved when the three rode up.  “Mornin’,” he greeted them.


“Mornin’, son,” the preacher replied.  “I reckon you’ve got work to do.  After we have a look, we’ll let you know and you can do whatever you want with the carcass.”


“I’d let it rot, myself,” the young man said, turning to spit tobacco on the ground.  “No way anyone’s eatin’ that meat.”  With that, he tipped his hat to the three of them and rode back towards the ranch.  


Night Sky swung of his mustang and passed the reins over.  The preacher took them and stayed atop his own mount, offering to take the sheriff’s as well.  The older man obliged absently, his eyes intent on the body.


“You were right,” said Night Sky in a rough voice.  “The blood is all gone.”  He was carefully poking at the body with the stock of his rifle.  “Like something sucked it out.  There are stories in Mexico of some creatures that do this, but they mainly attack goats.”   He leaned down, his dark eyes suddenly intent.  “But those do not have human hands.”


The sheriff carefully walked up, walking a wide circle around to where Night Sky stood.  Night Sky was pointing at the ground where three fingers and half a palm had been pressed into the soft dirt by a patch of touch prairie grass.  “It looks like something with human hands pushed it to the ground and caught itself.”  He turned and looked, taking careful steps in his soft moccasins.  “Wait.  No, the cow wasn’t pushed over.  These footprints shift and smudge, like it grabbed and threw it to the ground.”


“How do you mean?” the sheriff asked.  “Like, what kind of motion?”


Night Sky stood up and took a few steps back.  “Something like this motion,” he said, planting his feet, then pivoting them, which caused his body to turn.  


“Hrm,” the sheriff said.  “I saw a wrassler in a show a few years ago did a throw like that.  Grabbed the other feller and turned, threw him down hard.  Said he was German or something like that from Europe.”


Night Sky examined the ground more.  He pointed out where the cow had been standing, how it had tried to start running when the throw happened.  The preacher silently considered this.  A blood drinking creature that had the strength to throw a big longhorn cow.  He sighed to himself.  He’d half hoped that Night Sky would mention it being something some animal like a cougar might do if it were too thirsty.  


“That is all I can tell you,” Night Sky said quietly.  “Now, I must go.  I have other work to do today.”  With that, he swung onto his mustang and lit out across the range, away from town.  The preacher and the sheriff turned back towards town, riding briskly to try and beat the rain.  Along the way, the preacher outlined what he knew of vampires and his suspicions.


“Did you mention this to the folk at the XK?” the sheriff asked.


“No, I didn’t,” the preacher replied.  “Didn’t think it right to get them all scared up.”


“That’s smart,” the sheriff said.  As they turned up the edge of the street, the racing clouds created wildly shifting patterns of shadows of the buildings across the street.  It looked like the dark figures were almost running from something.


“So, where do these vampire things come from?” the sheriff asked in a quiet voice as they walked back into the jail.  


“They seem to come from Europe,” the preacher replied.  “The stories come out of the areas near the Mediterranean.”  


“Now I know what it is,” the sheriff said.  “Did you ever meet the feller that settled out in Bat Canyon about a year ago?”


“No, I never did,” the preacher replied.  “Name was Smith, right?”


“That’s what he said.”  The sheriff sat down at his desk.  “Never thought of it ‘fore, but he’s right peculiar.  Speaks with this thick accent, can’t hardly understand him.  Only comes into town after dark or on days when it’s all overcast.  Bat Canyon ain’t a fit place to grow nothin’, walls are so high that the sun don’t shine in there unless it’s right overhead.  Fresh water spring, though.  But let’s consider what you said.  No surprise you ain’t met him if’n he is one of these things.”

Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Story of William, section 6

"Look alive, lads!" came the bellow from the rear deck.  "We have incoming!"
William and the other Andoly on the deck turned their heads not back, but to the prow of the ship.  Ahead, the other ships in the fleet were cutting through the choppy seas on the high winds.  But then sounds of metal ringing and shouts began drifting back.  
"Fishmen have attacked the lead ships, more on the way!"
William straightened his leather armor and grabbed his sword and shield.  The short blade he’d brought as a spare weapon felt strange to him.  But, he had heeded the older sailors.  No man in his unit wore heavy armor now, but some had adopted long weapons like polearms or even harpoons since stabbing wouldn’t catch in the lines.
And, with only the sound of splashing as their introduction, fishmen clambered over the sides of the ship.  Their armor glittered like opalescent shells and their weapons seemed to be fashioned from living coral.  Their gills flared out, creating crests around their necks.  But their stench waved over the deck, souring in William's nose and making his stomach churn.
He bit back the bile rising in his throat and stepped to meet the attackers.  He swatted aside a thrust from a spear and slashed across, cutting through the scales on its upper arm.  The creature's grip went slack and William drove his blade up and under the bottom edge of the creature's breastplate.  He pulled the blade free and turned as another fishman moved to strike at his back with a wavy-bladed sword.  
That's when Detrious' massive mace took the creature on the side, filling the air with cracks and pops as it flew into and overt the railing.  William stepped beside the big troll and they set about grim work.  William cut the leg out from inert one as Detrious swung high, turning the thing laterally before it every touched the deck.  Detrious smashed the neck of another as William trapped its axe with his shield and sword.
William noted the Jenar sailors around the deck fighting as well.  They favoured one of two styles: fighting with a pair of short weapons like William's sword, or weapons with long reach like polearms, halberds or even harpoons.  The other thing he noticed is that they fought together, in coordinated pairs or groups.
More of the creatures hauled their way up the sides of the ship.  William turned his body so the swing of a large coral axe sliced only leather and kicked the fishman in what he took to be its inner.  He assumed he was right when it gurgled in obvious pain.  That's when William ducked and Detrious unleashed a full-armed swing directly overhead and into the face of the creature, cruising the bony ridges of its face back into its head.
William turned, looking for the next threat.  Some remaining attackers were leaping over the side and into the water.  Their shop had held, by and large.  Men nursed wounds, but the warning had been enough.  That wasn't the case on other ships.  Some ships had rigging collapsing and one was ablaze.  The ship dashed forward into the fleet.  Jenar sailors threw lines to pull men aboard while William and his men stood sentinel against more attacks.
"Sir?" A quiet voice cut through the fog.  William blinked.  Anton was leaned forward.  "Are you alright, sir?"
William shook his head.  Why had he...  As the carriage moved, he brushed aside one of the curtains.  The coach was rolling past the fish market.  "The smell," William said, "reminded me of something."

Thursday, May 30, 2013

Story of William, part 5


The ship slowly drifted up to the dock, the timbers creaking and the chatter of the crew drowning out other noises.  William stepped up on the deck, again fitted in his plate armor with his longsword at his hip.  He looked around, his dark eyes looking for familiar faces.
"Sir?" Anton's voice interrupted his train of thought.
"Yes, Anton?"  William turned to face him.  Anton was dressed in a vest and bracers of studded leathers.  He had an emblem of William's elk sigil on a strip of cloth tied around his forehead.
"What are you looking for?"
William took a deep breath.  "Friends, Anton.  People I know should be meeting us here." His gaze swept back to the crowd, scanning for people he knew.  But it wasn't a person that he saw, rather a familiar coach sitting at the end of the dock.  The emblem of his mother's thornes rose was set in the doors in bright enamel, unmistakable.  He turned to see Detrious lumbering up from below decks with chests in his arms.  Leaf came along behind, much happier to be docked.  The older elf disliked the sea, and had remained in the cabins.
"Leaf," William said.  He gestured to the coach.
"Yes, sir," Leaf replied with a smile.  "We will have the chests loaded shortly.  Why don't you go have a seat in the coach?"
William smiled.  Leaf would not hear otherwise, so he headed towards the gangplank.  Adovan had already disembarked, and stood at the base of the plank.  He wrote his plate as well, but had an emblem of William's elk pinned to his tabard.
"You don't have to wear that," William told him as he marched down to the dock.  "Neither of you," he said, turning to Anton.  “You’re very publically aligning yourself with me, and you don’t have to.  You’ll be able to go wherever you’d like once we get things sorted out.”
Anton looked at William, his young face puzzled.  “Sir, why would I not want with you?”
“If you hadn’t saved me from that camp, I’d be dead now,” Adovan said quietly.  “I owe you my life.”
William looked at the two of them, his throat feeling thick.  He couldn’t find the words, and nodded to them instead.  He turned and headed towards the coach.  He had only made a handful of steps when a hand took his elbow.  
He turned, finding a matronly woman with stately bearing glaring at him.  Her imperious nature immediately soured his opinion, but he strove for respect.  “Milady,” William said politely.
“You are William of house Stotts, yes?” she asked in impatient tones.
“I am,” William responded.  His desire for respect was waning quickly.
“You aren’t married yet.”  This wasn’t a question.  The way she said it was an accusation.  “That is a neglect of your duties as a nobleman and a disgrace.”
William saw Anton and Adovan start to step towards the woman and waved them back.  This wasn’t a fight to be settled by strength of arms.  “I have no neglected my duties,” he responded curtly.  “I’ve been fighting in the Army of Unity for the last several years.”
“Do not make excuses,” she responded.  “You should be married.  I am Lady Elaine of the Dentral.  My niece is of your age.  You will find her appropriate.”
William felt his hackles rise in anger.  This was the return he got after everything he’d been through?  “I do not find her appropriate by virtue of being your niece,” William responded.  He couldn’t resist the urge to be uncouth, and spat at her feet.  “You are unwelcome.”  
With that, he turned and strove for the coach.  He angrily threw the door open and stepped inside.  He was surprised to see it empty, but took the seat and unclipped his scabbard from his belt.  He leaned his head back and sighed.  
Footsteps and the creak of the coach’s steps caused him to open his eyes.  Anton carefully took a seat opposite him, looking hesitant.  “That... lady...” he said slowly.  “Her face turned dark, sir.”
“I expected as much,” William replied quietly.  “I insulted her and her niece very intentionally.  I doubt she’ll think much of myself or my family for the rest of her life.”  He looked around.  “Where is Adovan?  He’s not...”
“No,” Anton said.  “He’s at the door.  He won’t let anyone in.”  The young man fidgeted uncomfortably.  “I don’t understand.”
“I know,” William replied.  “I may have been a good soldier, Anton, but this world of polite society and politics is something I’m not good at.  That’s why I asked about wearing my emblem earlier.”
Anton looked back, meeting William’s eyes.  “I’m your man, always.”  There was iron in the young man’s voice that made William smile.  He looked around the inside of the coach and found the hangers beside the doors.
“In that case,” William said, “if you’re going to be an Andolman, you need to have a full uniform.”  With that, William pulled the two curved fighting knives with blades the length of his forearm from their sheaths, where they were kept in case of emergency.  “We can’t have a man of our entourage go out underdressed.”  William smiled as he handed the two blades to Anton.